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love-jackianto.livejournal.com posting in antigwenallies Oct. 31st, 2007 01:09 pm)Title: Cold Darkness
Characters: Gwen, Jack, Ianto
Rating: R for character death, bet you can't guess who.
Word Count: 210
Prompt: Write something creepy or evil to dispatch Gwen for Halloween.
Eyes as black as a moonless sky stared back at her. Gwen tried to run but Ianto grabbed her from behind. She felt Ianto press his face into her neck, his breath; as cold as a winter wind made her gasp. Gwen struggled against the man but he only tightened his grip, she felt a stabbing pain as several ribs splintered and he sunk his teeth into her neck. As her blood was forcible pulled from her body Gwen heard a familiar voice.
‘Someone must have worked up an appetite. That is enough.'
Jack stepped from the shadows, as calm as if he was asking for his morning coffee.
‘Sir?' Ianto said sounding slightly fearful and confused.
For one brief moment she was relieved, now that Jack was here surely he would save her, until she noticed how very pale the captain's skin was.
Jack looked into her fearful eyes and laughed, a laugh that cut through her like a knife.
‘You should satisfy your other appetites first.' Jack held out his arms in invitation.
Gwen felt her legs give out as Ianto released his grip walked over to a now grinning Jack.
Just before the cold darkness enveloped her Gwen saw Jack and Ianto share a passionate bloody kiss.
A/N: This fic is really just an excuse to use my vampire Ianto icon. Love to know what you all think. First time ever writing something that is not a drabble and unbated so feel free to point out any mistakes, it is the only way I'll learn.
Characters: Gwen, Jack, Ianto
Rating: R for character death, bet you can't guess who.
Word Count: 210
Prompt: Write something creepy or evil to dispatch Gwen for Halloween.
Eyes as black as a moonless sky stared back at her. Gwen tried to run but Ianto grabbed her from behind. She felt Ianto press his face into her neck, his breath; as cold as a winter wind made her gasp. Gwen struggled against the man but he only tightened his grip, she felt a stabbing pain as several ribs splintered and he sunk his teeth into her neck. As her blood was forcible pulled from her body Gwen heard a familiar voice.
‘Someone must have worked up an appetite. That is enough.'
Jack stepped from the shadows, as calm as if he was asking for his morning coffee.
‘Sir?' Ianto said sounding slightly fearful and confused.
For one brief moment she was relieved, now that Jack was here surely he would save her, until she noticed how very pale the captain's skin was.
Jack looked into her fearful eyes and laughed, a laugh that cut through her like a knife.
‘You should satisfy your other appetites first.' Jack held out his arms in invitation.
Gwen felt her legs give out as Ianto released his grip walked over to a now grinning Jack.
Just before the cold darkness enveloped her Gwen saw Jack and Ianto share a passionate bloody kiss.
A/N: This fic is really just an excuse to use my vampire Ianto icon. Love to know what you all think. First time ever writing something that is not a drabble and unbated so feel free to point out any mistakes, it is the only way I'll learn.
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Good descriptive words
But did you mean forcibly pulled from her body
Oh god I'm trying to give writing tips what has become of me *grin* You should write more you're good at it.
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The icon is ace too.
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