Spoof!Gack mini-fic

[burningtorch.livejournal.com]

 Hi again! 

It's been a while since I was last here, but something had been niggling at the back of my mind about why people liked Gwen, (it's because of her lovely shiny hair, don't you know *eye roll*) and one thing lead to another and I had to do a spoof of a Gack 'fic' based around this, well, 'fic' may be a little grandiose: 

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...Jack looked up at Gwen, her shiney hair had captivated his attention, it was like the universe was looking back at him... that was of course if you thought dandruff even slightly resembles stars...
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I am so sorry... *Sheepishly walks away* 

Comments

[gwen-of-cooper.livejournal.com]

*happy sigh*

Jack and I are so perfect together, and your little drabble perfectly highlighted the way Jack so often and lustfully stares at me.

TEN STARS!


♥ Gwen

[burningtorch.livejournal.com]

Well, thank you Gwen. I really think you two are as perfect together as custard and shepherd's pie; indeed Rachel in Friends made a trifle like that once.

[bk_forever]

*snort* Awesome!

[burningtorch.livejournal.com]

Thank you. (^_^)

[irishjantogirl.livejournal.com]

brilliant. canm i suggest the next sentance goes like this.

Jack was utterly transfixed by the sight before him. The dark hair, those perfect eyes which could see into his very soul and see the true person within. Thosee clothes that hugged the body so perfectly in all the right places and he let his mind wander as this vision of perfection walked towards his office. Nobody on Earth could compare to them...

The sound of a thorat clearing jumped him from his thoughts and he smiled at the person standing before him who had helped him become human and feel love again...

"Oh thank you Ianto," Jack grinned as Ianto handed over his coffee

[burningtorch.livejournal.com]

That's beautiful! (^_^)

[jsks.livejournal.com]

ianto save jack(us too) please.
thank you.

[jsks.livejournal.com]

poor jack.