Fiction: "Jack's Angels"

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Title: Jack's Angels
Author: wanda 1969
Rating: PG - I'd let kids read this
Pairing: Jack/Ianto (small amount),  Gwen being useless
Spoilers:Can't think of any at all
Summary:Torchwood characters shoehorned into a rather unexciting Charlie's Angels adventure! No Charlie's Angels characters in this though!
Note:This fic is  gwen-bashing. After a conversation where I worried that TW would turn into "Gwen's Angels" (God forgive!) I came up with this, instead, on Sunday afternoon (nothing on the telly!), as a minor showcase for Gwen's ineptitude....DOES THIS COUNT AS A CROSSOVER? 
I have never written fanfiction in my life, and this is completely unedited or corrected! So any mistakes are my own. It is purposely written in the TW fanfiction stylee....
I am also painfully aware that I have failed to write GOOD kick arse women- a bit like the writers of CoE- however I am not paid to be GOOD at this! Maybe next time... if there is a next time....
I have also never posted a link to LJ- so here's hoping this works... this has been very taxing! Please tell me if I am doing this completely wrong...!


LINK to "Jack's Angels"
http://wanda1969.livejournal.com/957.html

Comments

Cheers!

[wanda1969.livejournal.com]

Yet again I am amazed by the wobnders of the internet! This was written with absolutely no game plan at all- unfortunately the Charlie's Angels format means little "Bosley" OR "Charlie" and I had no plot in mind really- just wanted to show THE CHARACTER OF GWEN as a bit scheming, adulterous, and ready to fall over in her inappropriate clothing... And retconned out of existence!! If only....
Sadly all of this meant very little plot and not enough dialogue...perhaps now someone who can actulally write can continue.....with more Jack now he's out of the shadows...
Thankyou again!
PS IS this a CROSSOVER? I only learned how to post on LJ this very evening