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Title: Eyes
Author: fallenangel61    (me)
Summary:Gwen looks into Jacks eyes.
A/N: A drabble in response to prompt 011. - Eyes in the GwenBash Prompt table.
        This is also my very first attempt at fanfic, so any comments would be greatly appreciated.

Gwen lay on the ground in a dark alleyway, watching her blood pool around her. The gashes all over her face, torso and arms stung from where the Weevil had attacked her, and she was sure she had broken several ribs.

She heard running footsteps approach, and opened her eyes. Looking up, she saw Jack and the team standing over her.

“Thank God! Jack, please help me!”

“Sorry Gwen, it's just that, well, we don't really want to.”

Jack's blue eyes were hard and cold as he stood and watched the life fade from PC Gwen Cooper one last time.

Comments

[kellysaysrawrrx.livejournal.com]

love it! :D

[fallenangel61.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[love-jackianto.livejournal.com]

Nice story :D

[charlotte3006.livejournal.com]

Ouch! Harsh!
I still laughed though :D

[jerbearthompson.livejournal.com]

“Sorry Gwen, it's just that, well, we don't really want to.”

Best line ever! =D

[jsks.livejournal.com]

fits my bad mood perectly right now.

[fallenangel61.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. Sorry to hear you're in a bad mood though

[pinkmandy07.livejournal.com]

bloody brillant love it